Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Government should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve. The prompt recommends that government should use their judgment to serve nation because people might be using their point of view. In my opinion, I mostly agree and also doesn’t agree with this suggestion and argue that government should defiantly rely on their own judgment for some reasons.

For a nation, government official are those who are selected by get nation. Person with majority of votes through nation’s population is termed as government .Therefore government should be confident enough to serve their nation with great effort. Even government should make them proud, feel protected and accomplish their needs. If government follows every individual, then it would cost different demands with few sastifaction. For instance, take a scenario that government has some people saying to make public transportation free and some people saying to make public transportation not free. This would lead government confusion due to two different scenario. If government takes its own decision based on both the cases and follows to make public transportation cheaper, that both: poor and rich people can afford it. And so this would lead country with proper balance. So government should rely on their own judgment and produce unbiased decision.

Further, though government is chosen by people there are many live examples that says, people uses it’s power through indirect methods to achieve high votes. And this may lead the nation into worst scenario. For example- to govern the nation one might impress people by fulfilling their needs like making basic needs like grains, grocery available to poor in less rate or making poor impress by fulfilling their demands. But poor doesn’t have idea that government is doing this to impress them for specific time interval, so their votes might get increased by poor and may win. And if this happens the nation would get cunning people as government who before elections made all efforts. But after elections they uses power to live lavish life and just make nation’s money squander. So one must be aware of all kind of surrounding and should choose right person as government because lately after election these government will choose their judgment to serve the nation. So here nation population plays important role to choose government and let them fawn the future.

However some argue that media or society helps to promote you by inspiring your situation through variety of circumstances. But it is possible if one takes as a positive side of scenario and changes of this area highly less. So allowing media or society to decide your reputation is not appropriate.

So basically government and nation’s population are depend on each other because if people doesn’t let government decide on its own judgement than it may lead to turbulent. While is people doesn’t choose right government than it would be dangerous to let government decide on its own.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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...ation with great effort. Even government should make them proud, feel protected a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'scenario' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'scenarios'.
Suggestion: scenarios
...vernment confusion due to two different scenario. If government takes its own decision b...
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...us to let government decide on its own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 41.0 12.9106741573 318% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2199592668 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64748393601 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470468431772 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4559287385 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.52 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.64 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.24 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269025717966 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895640688973 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095586484798 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17360500308 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118886661959 0.0667264976115 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments