Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their family for a longer time. Which of these solutions do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
There is no shortage of opinion on whether the young adults want independence from their parents as early as possible or whether they want to live with their families for a longer time. But for me I would definitely select living with family is better option. I feel this way for three reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, living with family for long life span will not only be helpful to young but it will also be helpful to whole family. For example, if a child starts to live alone at age of 20 then it will make him exhausted as he needs to manage all things by himself like studying, washing utensils, cooking food and so on. But instead if he lives with his family then every one in the house will divide the work and make it easier so the child can focus more on studying and make his career to the high end. Even family would get advantage as from them also work is divided and so they can do more task then they use to do. For this reason I think always living with family be better option.
Secondly, young adults can spend more quality time with their family and even this will would make them happy. For instance, I attended a summer workshop in my vacation about attitude, time and goals where we were given a activity in which we were supposed to present a speech regarding time. A girl came and told very emotional story regarding her family that before her back grandparents use to talk only about her even though she use to spend just a month with them in a whole year and her friends with whom she was living whole year use to make fun of her. She realized this thing after her grandmother dealth and she got very sad that when she had time to stay with right people she wasted that time in her so called friends. Thus it is certainly clear to see why you should stay and spend time with your family.
Finally, when young adults face hard times they have no one supporting them expect their parents. Drawing from my own experience when I failed in my college exam every one made fun of me instead my parents motivated me and took me out to get divert from this situation. Even my mother use to sleep with me at nights when I had weird and bad dreams on exams and she use to make me understand at mid night that it is very small thing no need to worry. So I believe that parents are first and the only humans who actually concern the most about their kids.
In conclusion, the issue of whether young adults should live independently or with their family is a complex problem. Some have suggested that living independent makes you very confident. But, I still contend that living with family is advantageous as they will help in hard times, make work easier and can spend more time with family makes you very happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35783365571 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11851030903 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47001934236 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0664677551 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.65 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.85 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344971248204 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124078621665 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101570142716 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22295701294 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107419129556 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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