Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I believe that governors who are intelligent and wise could carry out policy based on their judgement, but the government should listen to its people in most cases because even experts could make mistakes occasionally.
A sane governor could rely on his or her profession to make a wise judgement, rather than blindly follow the will of the people of a nation. For example, Taiwan CDC (Centers of Disease Control and Prevention) leader Chen Shih-Chung has been successfully doing a great job in preventing corona-virus from spreading. Despite existing lots of opinion against Chen, he still sticks to his principle and not blindly follow the sound of the public. There has been more than one month without local newly confirmed cases while other countries still suffer from the prolific virus spreading. Another instance, Perng Fai-Nai is the president of Taiwan Central Bank and assigned as a financial governor. He had guided the interest, loan and financial policy for more than ten years. He has been awarded as a triple A grade bank president for more than ten times, and that is a great achievement in the history.
However, if a governor overlooks a crucial factor and does not listen to the sound of public, then he or she could make a big mistake. For instance, Taiwan education department had been widely established colleges and universities for more than ten years, but it did not consider the gradually declined birth rate. Recently, the consequence that has caused a lot of school close is devastating because they could not find enough students to enroll to provide enough money to support the finance.
The judgement of a governor could be self-serving and has an adverse impact on a nation, if it does not consider public interest. If a corrupt policy were executed, then the negative effect will influence on whole society. For instance, the dictator of North Korea, King Jong-Un has centralized his power regardless of the well-being of its people. He put the wherewithal of a nation on his army and powerful weapon instead of economy that could help improve the life quality of general people. Accordingly, people has suffered from the starvation and lived under poverty line.
In conclusion, wise government officials could rely on their judgement, but never limit their accessibility to the public, because it prevents them from making mistakes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06649616368 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72308745552 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557544757033 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0986729237 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.529411765 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092750317638 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301934072702 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383353745277 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637373817977 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362922740242 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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