Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Extended debate concerning the exact approach by the government of solving problems faced by a nation has taken precedence over various critical issues of the nation. Some promulgate that finding solution of the present day problems should be the prime focus of the government, while others denied that and propose that Government should focus more on the problems of the future rather than the current problems. Clearly, taking side to the later indicates that instead of finding a proper way to eradicate a problem that has been proved critical, it just allows to grow it larger. It is always desirable to eliminate the problems that are more alarming now rather than solving the problems of the future.
There is a huge difference between the facing of a problem by an individual and a nation as a whole. Problem of an individual can be of greater importance or of less importance depending upon the subjective nature of the person. However, government as a whole can 't behave same as an individual; when the government is facing a problem it is not solely personal, rather it is the problem of the whole nation. For example, whether a person likes to solve a quandary for a silly reason in his family immediately is completely depending upon his choice; it might be possible he is dealing with some more severe problems in his life. On the contrary, government as a whole has to deal any incendiary that has been arose among its people immediately without focusing any other problem. Government if doesn't focus to a growing problem immediately,it will create some more problems which will be difficult to solve in the future.
Moreover, the challenges that are seemed to be problems in the future might be possible to face if the current problems have been solved accordingly. For example, dengue, a mosquito virus in subcontinent India has turn into an epidemic due to the negligence of the government in the past days. The Government of India can easily resolve the problem if they were more awake about the negative effects of the dengue fever and underscore to solve it accordingly. Emancipation of black slavery would never be possible if the American Government didn't pay enough attention to solve it at the right time and it would raise more chaos in the future for sure.
However, it is certainly desirable to anticipate the problems that a government can face in the future and prepare itself accordingly. There might be a misconception that only present problems should be focused which is not focused here; government should eliminate their current pressing problems and make themselves ready to fight against the future problems accordingly.
A proverb goes "a stitch in time, saves nine". Government as a whole work for the people not for itself. So, when a problem arises it means it is the problem of the countrymen. So instead of focusing a future problem, it should try to eliminate all of its' current problems and then proceed further as required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... silly reason in his family immediately is completely depending upon his choice; it might be possible h...
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Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...as to deal any incendiary that has been arose among its people immediately without fo...
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Line 5, column 796, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...cusing any other problem. Government if doesnt focus to a growing problem immediately,...
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Line 5, column 841, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...t focus to a growing problem immediately,it will create some more problems which wi...
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Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'turned'.
Suggestion: turned
...osquito virus in subcontinent India has turn into an epidemic due to the negligence ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... be possible if the American Government didnt pay enough attention to solve it at the...
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Line 17, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ole work for the people not for itself. So, when a problem arises it means it is the pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2497.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96421471173 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76605849646 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44930417495 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5068927426 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.85 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.15 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492000660906 0.243740707755 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162168313232 0.0831039109588 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103413456391 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297594707199 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077263204694 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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