Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ing in infrastructure, etc. In the more economical terms, its a countrys GDP and rate of g...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ure, etc. In the more economical terms, its a countrys GDP and rate of growth per y...
^^^
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... economic development, like arts, sports , etc are looked after differently in di...
^^
Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment, like arts, sports , etc are looked after differently in different countries...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... how strong these other pillars are. Lets take for example a small country like I...
^^^^
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... investment will cast serious doubts on governments inability to priortize the right vertic...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...iding safe lands for its citizen. In contrast a developed country like USA, which has...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...This is not because that their military doesnt require any investment but because of t...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oping country will take time to build up . Since America has strong foothold in th...
^^
Line 7, column 800, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... is expected than a developing country. However this investment shall still not be the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ion out the major verticals in countrys economical development and list our major and mino...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, in contrast
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3300.0 2235.4752809 148% => OK
No of words: 650.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04926703274 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82872984255 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466153846154 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1040.4 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3211455316 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.47826087 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2608695652 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147412527167 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055305301614 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415133821891 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11184669275 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478038725523 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ing in infrastructure, etc. In the more economical terms, its a countrys GDP and rate of g...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ure, etc. In the more economical terms, its a countrys GDP and rate of growth per y...
^^^
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... economic development, like arts, sports , etc are looked after differently in di...
^^
Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment, like arts, sports , etc are looked after differently in different countries...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... how strong these other pillars are. Lets take for example a small country like I...
^^^^
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... investment will cast serious doubts on governments inability to priortize the right vertic...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...iding safe lands for its citizen. In contrast a developed country like USA, which has...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...This is not because that their military doesnt require any investment but because of t...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oping country will take time to build up . Since America has strong foothold in th...
^^
Line 7, column 800, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... is expected than a developing country. However this investment shall still not be the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ion out the major verticals in countrys economical development and list our major and mino...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3300.0 2235.4752809 148% => OK
No of words: 650.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04926703274 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82872984255 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466153846154 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1040.4 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3211455316 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.47826087 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2608695652 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147412527167 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055305301614 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415133821891 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11184669275 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478038725523 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.