Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d casts or they have been extras during the the programs? We also need to have data if ...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d casts or they have been extras during the the programs? We also need to have data if ...
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Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pend performing for the ballet companies , i.e. has it been a short stint or a maj...
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Line 5, column 706, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...e. has it been a short stint or a major ones. Since the recommendation throws no lig...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... more about the literati for this school , is the confusion that the recommendatio...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d 'many' is itself ambiguous. If we had a data written in percentages it...
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Line 7, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sional dancers wiith erstwhile companies , it would have been a significant number...
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Line 7, column 552, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... it would have been a significant number . Or if we would know if the data is abou...
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Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...ons are still large. Did these students were able to retain their role for a longer ...
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Line 7, column 994, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
.../ part-time workers? Did these students worked backstage or they were performing the m...
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Line 7, column 1567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of geographical aspects while doing so? We are also in the need of understand if...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...nt without which I would not hetherhito agree with the fact that Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, while, another thing, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 28.8173652695 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 55.5748502994 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3203.0 2260.96107784 142% => OK
No of words: 648.0 441.139720559 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94290123457 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.56307096286 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69441115221 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 204.123752495 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436728395062 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 959.4 705.55239521 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.943219333 57.8364921388 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.458333333 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349529364917 0.218282227539 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105904902381 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10214476333 0.0701772020484 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217886004735 0.128457276422 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741378994829 0.0628817314937 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 98.500998004 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 649 350
No. of Characters: 3126 1500
No. of Different Words: 287 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.047 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.817 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.573 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 202 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 142 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 104 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 79 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.217 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.436 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.565 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.178 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5