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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 649 350
No. of Characters: 3126 1500
No. of Different Words: 287 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.047 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.817 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.573 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 202 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 142 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 104 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 79 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.217 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.436 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.565 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.178 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d casts or they have been extras during the the programs? We also need to have data if ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d casts or they have been extras during the the programs? We also need to have data if ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pend performing for the ballet companies , i.e. has it been a short stint or a maj...
^^
Line 5, column 706, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...e. has it been a short stint or a major ones. Since the recommendation throws no lig...
^^^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... more about the literati for this school , is the confusion that the recommendatio...
^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d 'many' is itself ambiguous. If we had a data written in percentages it...
^^
Line 7, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sional dancers wiith erstwhile companies , it would have been a significant number...
^^
Line 7, column 552, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... it would have been a significant number . Or if we would know if the data is abou...
^^
Line 7, column 858, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...ons are still large. Did these students were able to retain their role for a longer ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 994, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
.../ part-time workers? Did these students worked backstage or they were performing the m...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of geographical aspects while doing so? We are also in the need of understand if...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...nt without which I would not hetherhito agree with the fact that Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, while, another thing, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 28.8173652695 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 55.5748502994 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3203.0 2260.96107784 142% => OK
No of words: 648.0 441.139720559 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94290123457 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.56307096286 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69441115221 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 204.123752495 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436728395062 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 959.4 705.55239521 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.943219333 57.8364921388 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.458333333 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349529364917 0.218282227539 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105904902381 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10214476333 0.0701772020484 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217886004735 0.128457276422 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741378994829 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 98.500998004 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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