Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Education makes the foundation of a nation. Certainly, it is the responsibility of the government to entertain its' citizen with proper knowledge and education. In this connection, many people argue that government should make the secondary and post-secondary education free to everybody. In my opinion, government should make the primary education free, however, the expense of the college and university education should never be fully covered by the government. I would illustrate my opinion with two specific examples in this writing.
First of all, government has limited amount of funds available and it has many obligations to do for its' people. Higher level education requires sophisticated equipment, expert teachers and other necessary facilities. If the government spends all its' fund that have been gathered from the tax of the general mass, it won't contribute to the development of the communities. As a consequence, the nation will have educated people with broken infrastructure of the nation. Eventually, the graduates will decide to leave their motherland for better opportunities. Consider the migrants of Canada, USA or UK who are actually the citizen of any third world country like Sri Lanka, Bangladesh, Myanmar etc. Most of them take the asylum because of the scare opportunities of their home land. If this continues,the rate of migration will be higher in the future. Although it adds cultural diffusion and diversity, those people can contribute more to their nations if they get enough support from the government. Therefore, the government should distribute its funds to the development of the nation in all dimensions, not only to educate the children until they become graduates.
Secondly, although primary education is consistent for all students, there are divisions in college and university education. For instance, students can pick the elective courses based on their preferences. Besides, students pick university according to the lab facility, infrastructure and other benefits which are varied from university to university. If the government wants to make the education free, it has to ensure that the facilities are uniform for all institutions. This is impractical because a business graduate does not need the advanced lab equipment like an engineering background. Similarly , a student from historical background does not need to access computers to attend programming contest or to do business mathematics. Therefore,it should be decided by the appropriate institutional authority about which type of programs they would like to offer and the corresponding fees. The government may monitor and regulate the schemes but it should never bear all the expenses of the college or university grads.
To summarize, it is a long-held belief that government plays the most vital role to educate the people and that's why it should make the education free of charge. I strongly feel that it is not the right option to let the government bears all the educational expenses for college or university students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, as to, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43459915612 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11525884529 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516877637131 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2987447211 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.04 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.96 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427599671037 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108766819761 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106406953795 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286946840707 0.150359130593 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936051272987 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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