Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
Education is the backbone of a nation.It plays an immense role upon our lives and also on society.Thus an educated nation is a must for any country at any means.The prompt recommends that government should make college and university education free of costs. In my opinion i strongly agree for three reasons.
Firstly, education if one the inherent rights of people living in the country.If education can be made free of cost then maximum participation will be ensured. Economic disparity prevails in our society.All are not equally solvent and some are incapable to carry on education charges. As an instance we can look into the case of Germany.They made higher education free of costs and thus obtained the position of one of the preferable places for higher study aspirants.They reached the acme of progress through technical innovation. Thus it clearly dictates that if education is free of cost, more engagement will be obtained.
Secondly, imparting education among the mass people will also advance towards economic and social development for any country.The literacy rate should be maintained optimum.People through individual progress can ultimately bring about success for the country as a whole.As an instance we can see the progress of countries like israil, iran and china.Through investing huge amount of money on research ,they have now acquired top position in terms of growth rate.These examples denotes the impact of education and making it free will be more beneficial.
Thirdly, education is the panacea to many problems in the society. It can eradicate unemployment problems at large.Besides, as people develops the sense of conscience, the degree of corruption also declines.
One might gainsay that ,the government might incur huge loss.In its defense ,it can be stated that this can be seen as an investment which will repay back in the long run.As education plays a pivotal role in obtaining prosperity, it should me made free of charges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31111111111 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9466132431 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.329754507 60.3974514979 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.3 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195138863729 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808573177159 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652924701738 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112098063514 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615914897908 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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