Parents should volunteer time for childrens school.

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Parents should volunteer time for childrens school.

Assigning children to a school is not the end of activities for the parents.In order to ensure proper development and growth, parents role is prominent.The prompt recommends that parents should volunteer time to their children's schools.In my opinion i strongly agree and argue for three reasons.

Firstly,parents can play a vital role by teaching his children to maintain a regular and disciplined life.This activities doesnt end by getting him to a good school only.Parents should keep an eye on him and monitor his regular activities.Their constant care and cautiousness can led his son to prosper. In our soceity we see many fimilies where parents are busy with their activities and their childrens are brought up by maid or servant.In most cases they dont manage time to have conversation regarding school.Thus children arent monitored and their self and social development gets disrupted.The above example clearly dictates the importance of parents time allocation to children.

Secondly, parents can play an immense role to inspire their children.They are the ones whom children pay heed to. If a son or daughter fails at a particular task, they can rejuvinate them.Its the foremost duty and responsibility of parents to look after every matter.There are a lot of cases where students lacking proper inspiration adopts various negative means.Most of todays parents lead a corporate life and they have little time to look over their children.Thus due to lack of appropriate guideline,they gets derailed.This clearly indicates the importance of parents time allocation to his childrens school.

Thirdly, a parents should also look after teh case whether school is providing neccessary care or not.Often times we see the school authority become negligent in performing their duties.This perfunctory duties will have a deleterious effect on a child. Thus parents should monitor their activities too.

One might say that this might hamper the professional life of a parent.But,isnt rasing a child and to impart in him proper values an important duty too? However busy a parent be,he must look after his children . Their role cant be done by other and thus not replaceable.So, in light of above discussion, it is clearly evident that parents should vounteer time to childrens school.

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also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in most cases, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40555555556 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12881346267 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.146625004 60.3974514979 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.6 118.986275619 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 5.21951772744 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449904654681 0.243740707755 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198683246489 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108159678174 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285648665055 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845808441883 0.0667264976115 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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