All parents should be required to volunteer time at their children's schools.
It’s believed that with volunteer help from the parents, schools can be more effective in establishing a perfect learning environment. However, in contrast to the statement, I disagree that parents should be required to dedicate their time to school.
To begin with, if volunteer time is the time that children go to school, it’s unlikely that the school can find enough parents that are available since parents still need to go to work when their children are in school. Take the schools in the city where I grew up, for example, this city is known for its strong technology development, in which many famous technology companies are located. Most children's parents work in these companies with high workloads and intense, so taking a day off to volunteer in school is not readily possible. Therefore, as I studied in the school, I hardly noticed the school would require our parents to make an effort at school since I believed the school knew that our parents had no time to volunteer.
Second, let’s suppose the parents agree to the school’s requirements. However, if there are enormous numbers of students in the school, there will be tons of people flowing to the school every day since every student will at least have one parent come to school. This might cause several problems that might hamper the operation of the school. For example, student safety is a big concern, since by then there might be many unfamiliar people appearing in the school, increasing the safety risks for the students.
Although volunteers might release the huge workload of teachers and school faculties, it can’t be guaranteed that all volunteers will make significant effort on the volunteer work Those who are unwilling to volunteer at first might just casually finish the assigned work after they were forced to come to school. Therefore, instead of being beneficial, this volunteer time requirement might induce more burden on the school.
To sum up, based on the points mentioned above, the school shouldn’t require parents to volunteer their time at school. Parents should have their own right to choose whether they are able to conduct these volunteer works.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, at least, for example, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08379888268 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57816235569 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505586592179 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7904622453 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.21951772744 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.566617839108 0.243740707755 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213053511736 0.0831039109588 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128124260707 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344336643551 0.150359130593 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866959752617 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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