Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
"Education is the most powerful weapon which people can use to change the world" Nelson Mandela.
Education is very important in today's world. It illuminates a person's mind and thinking and empowers him/her to do well in his/her career. Education helps people to think rationally, and behave nicely. In my opinion it is right of all people to get good education. There are several benefits of having good education such as good career, and good status in society, leading to a good nation. Therefore, every government should try to make university education free for all students who are unable to pay their fees.
As we all know that these days education costs are increasing day by day. These days a decent bachelor course of four years can even cost half million dollors. It is very hard for parents to fund their childern university education. In developing countries like India, Pakistan, Srilanka etc, having a university education in developed countries is a dream for students, which can be fullfilled by only handful rich family kids. In India, lost of children do not get chance to study because of lack of funds and they work as child laborers in restaurents, shops to help their parents financially. In such a grim situation, why university education cannot be free to these students ?
In case of India, which is a youth country having 40% population as youth, university education or higher education matters a lot to its economical development. An educated population is an asset which benefits the country in many ways. Once the students get good education, it ges jobs in several fields like doctor, engineer, lawyers and contribute to the development of nation. They established start-ups which boost economy, they worked for NGO which contribute several sector of human developments and they also become role model in their community, motivating other childern to become educated and have a nice life.
Admittedly, it is impossible for governments to afford such huge expenses. Not every govt. is rich and has resources like United States to fund all university students. Govt. has responsibility to take care education of all age groups such as primary education, secondary education, and higher secondary education. Govt. tends to focus more on school education of students rather than university education.
Further, even if goverment has enough money to provide free education to all college students, university would not have enough funds to provide better facilities to their students. Colleges needs money to improve their labs, libraries, standard of faculties and infrastructures. Students having free education also sometimes put little afforts towards their studies compare to students paying tution fees. Therefore, a stricter measures can be used to check over background of students receiving free education and only deserving candidates should be given chances.
In conclusion, a free university education is good for students and good for a nations. However, the application of such policy should have some checks and constraints so that only needy students gets benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s who are unable to pay their fees. As we all know that these days education c...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...eir fees. As we all know that these days education costs are increasing day by d...
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Line 5, column 598, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...hops to help their parents financially. In such a grim situation, why university e...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ion cannot be free to these students ? In case of India, which is a youth country...
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Line 6, column 138, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...r higher education matters a lot to its economical development. An educated population is ...
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Line 6, column 466, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sector seems to be countable; consider using: 'several sectors'.
Suggestion: several sectors
...y, they worked for NGO which contribute several sector of human developments and they also bec...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...ation is good for students and good for a nations. However, the application of such polic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2634.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31048387097 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86885405545 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522177419355 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 837.9 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0478083099 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340216268938 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938020209124 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844406849634 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171243869209 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779980647345 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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