Traveling to other countries is a way for people to take time away from their daily worries. While visiting a foreign country, some people like to go to the tourist attractions while others prefer going to quiet places where they can truly enjoy the country’s culture.
The topic presented the controversial issue of purpose behind travelling. Indisputably, people all over the world travel to any foreign countries to see the famous things and monuments presented there. They has purpose to discern the worlds of world that they have seen many times in televisions or in mobile with their naked eyes. Nevertheless, there are several peopel of opposite side of the coin. These people want to travel to scotch their oscillating mind by experiencing a different foreign culture. Such culture generally found in quiet place provides healing effects to human mental problems. Therefore, in my case, I would like to visit quiet places when it comes to visiting abroad and point out several reasons for such preference.
First of all, silence is called a great healer to human mental issues. In the present world, several issues, problems, and works are troubling the human being in several ways. The major effect is seen in people nervous system. Earler, psycological concerns were not so common as they are todays. Due to these, the population are aching for rest. They are looking for places, which is far away from their offices, and boss reach. To mitigate their disorder, and enjoy a different environment, people visit abroad. Consequently, I also prefer to have meditation in the rocky hill of Himalayas, when it comes to taking off from office mundane work.
Furthermore, some visits abroad to know the different culture of that place, a foreign place. The culture of a place does not reflected in the tourist places since those places were the culture monuments at times in the history but now they are not. The customes, and traditions are generally reflected in the peopole who lives in villages, and country sides. This situation specially comes to true when we want to know more about other countries people behaviour, their traditional attire, their customs and their history. For instance, last year when I went to USA to complete my thesis on New England Historical monuments, my professor recommended me to visit Mississipi river rather than spending night life in New York. When I visited that river, I came to know about the trade that used to happen between Native americans and Colonists people.
Admittedly, whenever a person invest his or her saving to tour a foreign country, he or she wants to save some memories. Posting images in social media platforms such as Facebook and Instagram and talking to his or her friends about wonderful trip are the evidences and memory of person's journey. This is true specially when it comes to investment of large sum of money and large some of time in the present fast running world. However, the above purpose does not fulfill and meets the criteria for everyone. Because, every person has different needs and purposes for visit to abroad. Some wants to see the Taj Mahal of Agra while others want to visit the temples of Varanasi.
In conclusion, I prefer the latter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ngs and monuments presented there. They has purpose to discern the worlds of world ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'reflect'
Suggestion: reflect
... place. The culture of a place does not reflected in the tourist places since those place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2473.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98588709677 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57153049529 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558467741935 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2523722148 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3214285714 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287806718407 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633590794092 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051195374646 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136255244792 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579269382946 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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