Knowledge is an important part of our life. Some people prefer having deep knowledge about one particular subject, while others prefer having widespread knowledge about a variety of subjects. Which do you prefer and why?
The topic presented the controversial issue of importance between in-depth knowledge of a field and superficial knowledge of several fields. Knowledge is paramount to survival of human beings on Earth. Some consider this as a form of education that people receive at Schools and Universities while others invision it as knowledge beyond professional circle. Additionally, some people give preference to deep insights of one particular subject while some prefer to have widespread insights of several subjects. I generally agree with the several field knowledge over single field knowledge. I present several reasons for my view in the following paragraphs.
First of all, multifaceted education or knowledge make a person all rounder active. I would like to point out that the more subjects you know, the less trouble you would get in career. To illustrate, let us look at the example of jobs in market. People who knows to accomodate themselves according to situations, people who possess several skills such as communication, technical, bargaining and marketing and people who easily locate themselves according to company demand are always preferred in each and every companies. In this circumstance, obviously companies has several tasks that they wanted to get done from their employees. In the same time, companies also want to cut the cost of their operations and management. Therefore, they always want to hire a person who can work in operation, technology and management in the same time.
Secondly, human like to have understanding of several subjects at a time. It helps him or her in case of poor situation like economic crisis, firing, and any unforeseen events. Specifically, students who possess several talents and skills get jobs even in very poor economic situation of company. Last year, when COVID-19 attacked in India, there were several of my friends lost their job. There were mechanical engineers, civil engineers, management professionals and other profession related persons. In that situation, student who change themselves according to the condition and who already had some knowledge of several other subjects got job easily in the market.
Admittedly, being expert in any field is very challenging but the same way it is so much respected and rewarded. A doctorate in petroleum energy sector would always get more remunration than a petroleum engineer who only did undergraduation. This is specially true in case of jobs that require special education, and expert knowledge of the field. However, in the market, more than 80 percentage jobs are available in those sectors that do not require experts. These market require all rounder workforce.
In conclusion, although connoisures of a field whether it is engineering or medical are rewarded more than a rookie, but the space available for all rounder or several skills possessing person are more and readily available.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36244541485 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96959606535 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5576265266 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.24 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21637817684 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559390839183 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827792016415 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112304931168 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122827119258 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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