Knowledge is an important part of our life. Some people prefer having deep knowledge about one particular subject, while others prefer having widespread knowledge about a variety of subjects. Which do you prefer and why?
Nowadays it is crucial to have a vast amount of knowledge and people are seeking it through an assortments ways. Even though some people prefer sheer knowledge about a particular subject, others state otherwise. The latter think that it is important to have widespread knowledge from many subjects. In my opinion, having knowledge about different subjects overdoes one particular subject. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, when we have knowledge about many different subjects no one can try to pull our legs or convince us to do any wrongdoing. For example, we are surrounded by bad people and it is easy to make mistakes in any area of our endeavours. They can persuade us from robbing others stating that if we do it, we will be rewarded with thousands of dollars. Then, if we are running out of money to feed our family than, we may end up doing the wrongdoing. Therefore, this example elucidates the desideratum of having knowledge about a variety of subjects to fend off some wrongdoings.
Moreover, another case happens when we work as a consultant and different clients ask us about different situations. For instance, one of my professors works as a consultant and he needs to have such knowledge because he will have to help different people in different situations, providing then great retorts in order to make money. Thus, this another instance illustrates the necessity of knowing about different subjects.
Furthermore, it is interesting to have plenty of knowledge to avoid being fooled in life because this way we may end up loosing everything we have. As another example, my grandfather almost lost his house to the church because he was being convincing on gambling it for religious purposes. Hence, this another example clarifies the necessity of knowing everything deeply.
Finally, I strongly believe that having knowledge in a variety of subjects is better because it averts losts, it provide great answers for people in need and also prevents of wrongdoings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...st of all, when we have knowledge about many different subjects no one can try to pull our leg...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...s is better because it averts losts, it provide great answers for people in need and al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9940652819 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83351249663 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7434110929 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386889490652 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136378920661 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126076263289 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220861519643 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148382766238 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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