What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
As the world is moving very fast nowadays, one very important ability to be developt is to be patience.
First, at work he has to develop such skill. For example, he is dealing with people every single day and he may loose his control if they are not in a good mood. People's mood is a very hard task to face. Therefore, having control of himself can eschew loosing clients or being fired.
Second, he faces lots of adversities in his personal lives. For instance, he can see them in his family, in his relationship or with among his friends. When his partner is angry at something else out of the relationship, she tries to goad him in order to relieve her pain. In this case, only some admonitories are enough to make a win-win. With his friends, the situation works alike.
Third, he feels pressure while in an university. As an example, he has already started a five years course, however he wants to finish the degree as soon as possible. But to accomplish the goal, he needs to study hard spending long hours and days to get the work done. Furthermore, he ought to feel calm during the university exams in order to pass.
Finally, patience works for everybody every single moment in the person's life. Also, everybody should learn how to develop it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...with people every single day and he may loose his control if they are not in a good m...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ke. Third, he feels pressure while in an university. As an example, he has alrea...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...or everybody every single moment in the persons life. Also, everybody should learn how ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56637168142 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47311489472 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650442477876 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4906234014 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107699099875 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378185986066 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055693387561 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792837498728 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076396381504 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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