It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
A new restaurant being built nearby my house may be a good idea not only for me but for my neighbors soever. I do support the plan that it is going to grow the services around my neighborhood.
Firstly, there is going to be necessary more people to work for the establishment. The owner will have to hire cookers, cleaners and many other specialized people to accomplish specific tasks. Then, job opportunities will be released and many entrants will have the chance to apply for the acquired position. In addition, the profits will increase not only for the community but for the city and maybe many other cities will be urged on doing it as well.
Secondly, it is going to be an easy and faster way for people who work nearby. For instance, They will not need to have to return home to have lunch. Besides, they will have more time to relax after lunch, what they would not have if they had to return home and spend long hours with traffic or cooking meals. Therefore, stopping working, crossing street, having lunch and relax and get back to work are expected from those who work near the new restaurant.
However, there are some cons. For example, there are not enough spaces and where it is not a place surrounded by houses or buildings it is a green place where it is no longer possible to be razed.
Finally, I strongly advocate to build the new restaurant near my house because it is going to be very helpful. I will use it every day and I am sure that my family, friends and neighbors will do the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45323741007 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40496613675 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8363728853 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11714937756 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470187208505 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532254438863 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785732179087 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724212510345 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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