In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
In teenagerhood the only role that a student should play is just to study. Some people may think that teenagers should start working while still studying because this way it would be possible to make money and pay for further studies. But, the student engaged in one duty needs to first finish the studies then to start looking for jobs.
First, teenagers are exposed to a bunch of information in high school. Each following day, they are taugh about many things which had happened and are happening worldwide. But, unfortunately, after classes they do not even have time to review what they were taugh. Perhaps this is due to the fact that they have tasks to do at home. Therefore, they end up failing the test.
Second, the time-consuming for a teenager engaged in any job is too much and his efforts for both tasks can not be properly accomplished. For example, when I was in high school, I had to work to help my parents financially. By the end of the week I was exhausted but I still had to keep me up to be able to study. Fortunately, I succeeded in both tasks.
However, there is no a good time if not in teenagerhood to start workinh while studying. For instance, this way not only will the teenager acquire some knowledge from high school but also, he will learn from the job. Because as he works, he starts developing many skills which might probably have been undercovered. Then, such abilities may help him in the future.
Finally, in every country, the only obligation that the teenager may have is to study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: now
...eeded in both tasks. However, there is no a good time if not in teenagerhood to s...
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...ed. Then, such abilities may help him in the future. Finally, in every country, ...
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...that the teenager may have is to study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57008198673 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2653560886 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7058823529 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18953795839 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541808791013 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520763590342 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976367672639 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388418773173 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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