The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Abraham Lincoln once said: "never give up your dreams, otherwise you are going to fail in your life". This is a trully statement about people's life. I do agree if one gives up, he will certainly stop living and failing his accomplishments.
First, a person needs to work hard in life in order to obtain success. There are many obstacles in life which may make him to give up. For example, work issues and personal life are the most common drawbacks to be overcome. Therefore, a single speech with his partner at home and his boss at work would be useful for him.
Second, one ought to scretch a graphic and underscore the priorities tasks in life to obtain. For instance, he needs to put aside tasks which can be unuseful and work more in better ones. Then, they will become more valuable and there will be no chances to give up.
Furthermore, when a person gives up, not only does he stop living but he also falls into depression. For example, my mother's dream was to become flight attendant. She started working hard to reach the goal but, unfortunately, due to financial family hindrances, she could not accomplish it. Therefore, she is still being assisted by a psychologist.
Finally, as it is said: "never give up but if it happens, stand up and go for your goals".
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70309262824 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.369344606 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.2 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227253957191 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727505785833 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729791841195 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141959023122 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925155284202 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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