There is an famous saying said that " Never, never give up", alarming people not to discord their own goal and make great efforts to fulfill their dreams. Some individuals seem this saying as a motto due to their success according to their firm believes, however, I disagree with some paspects of this meaning for several reasons which will be elobarated as follows.
Admittedly, there is no doubt that if we want to succeed subsequently, we have to strive for our goal and never give up. For instance, Jack Ma, the most affluent mechant according to the statistic from Forbes, who failed 7 times on college entrance examination, finally be successful at the eighth time and went to college then. Without the firm belief from his own heart and the efforts he made, he won't have the later achievement and possess his own conpanies then. However, the effort he makes is essential, but it not means that, he continuous trying without relaxation.
First and foremost, relaxing is essential during the long distance pursuing your dream from two aspects. From the healthy angle, individuals who don't relax their emotions and constantly working are likely to get sick. To the extremes, it is common that, people who are addicted in their work without resting are died due to the heart disease. Therefore, to maintain a healthy body is the prerequisite of people's achievement. From the method angle, it is evident that tremendous individual are defeated even if they made their great efforts to fulfill their dreams. In practise, it isnot the fault of their behaviors but the methodology during their studying. Take myselves as an example. Although I dedicate myself and tried 5 time to participate in Tofel test, but actually I got 22 scores on Writing part 5 times. After communicating my writing approaches to my friend Emily, who gain 28 scores in this test, I found that it is because the wrong focus of my practise.
Furthermore, there are also some people trying their best on the paths that are unsuitable for them. There is an another saying said that, you are just retreating when you are making efforts to the wrong direction. So it is really important to find fit path for individuals or their efforts mean nothing.
In conclusion, although never give up is a necessary step for everyone to succeed, to maintain a good health, find the right methodology and choose the suitable direction are more important than just striving.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
There is an famous saying said that ' Never, n...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...From the healthy angle, individuals who dont relax their emotions and constantly wor...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a saying' or 'another saying'.
Suggestion: a saying; another saying
... that are unsuitable for them. There is an another saying said that, you are just retreating when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94430992736 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6448038426 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556900726392 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4125441808 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.473684211 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175429207174 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473554793335 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056226280438 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105113118876 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634873161541 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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