In many cultures, the priority is given to marriage over employment. What's your opinion on getting married without worrying about getting a job?
Getting married is a process that takes time and thinking. If we want to get married, first we need to prepare ourselves for it. It is not a matter of just to get married and that is it. We need to see how we are going to maintain the marriage. For example, we do need a job so that we will have money to pay the bills that will come. Or he or she has to work in order to feed the family. Or even if both can work, it is much better. A marriage without planning is somehow difficult to survive.
However, if we live in a family where our father or our mother works and feeds us, we do not need to worry about job. Specially in some cases when they die and we are given a lot of money. All we need to do is just to manage the money properly to survive for a long time. There are also some situations where the grandfather and the grandmother help the couple and it happens the same after they die, the couple receive a bunch of money.
But in summary, I believe that first we need to get a job. We should make a plan and get married afterwords.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, as to, for example, in summary, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 1207.87684729 69% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.95734597156 5.00649968141 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17504050421 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 379.143842365 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2906062712 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6428571429 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146736124519 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679878257305 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663090134294 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124877290487 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572253276265 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 12.6369458128 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 53.1260098522 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.9458128079 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.1 11.5310837438 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.32886699507 75% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 55.0591133005 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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