People in many countries, mostly with traditional cultures, believe that the main priority for youngsters is getting married. In this regard, they may lose many job opportunities or do not find a chance to develop their professional career. In this essay, I will explain how this idea has many drawbacks for both the individuals and the society.
Many resources of a country are spent for every individual person to grow in a society. When a young person finishes his/her educations, he/she should have a chance to pay back the dues. This may be limited when someone is rushing into marriage. For example, when a girl gets married right after graduation from university, she may find it hard to take care of both her family and her professional responsibilities. Putting marriage as the first priority may decrease the motivations to work outside the house.
Most people look at a job as a way to overcome their financial needs. If people do not have any financial issues, they may leave searching for a job. This is mostly true about women. A recent research shows that more than 75 percent of housewives do not like to have a job because they feel financially stable. Marriage will create a security feeling in people and stops them from searching for job opportunities.
To conclude, getting busy after marriage and having financial stability are the main causes that stops people to worry about employment. In my opinion, people in a developed country should feel responsible about their community and try to work in order to improve the society. Therefore, marriage should not be a priority, at least until someone is economically and mentally mature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: Recent research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, therefore, at least, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82288627489 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6742922647 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193131678108 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617630392798 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559573412281 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118067725909 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04103435109 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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