What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Modern word changes behind our very eyes, so we should adapt to the new features in order to satisfy the last requirements of the world. I feel the skill of learning has become one of the most important skills now. What I mean by learning skill is a possibility of rapidly studying new and choosing what to study, because those allow us to stay on the edge of now.
To begin with, today’s world changes at the speed of light so we should follow the current tendencies to be successful. Outdated dies and new comes to the change; by the same token, people who do not follow the wind of change can stay at past and can pass over plenty of opportunities. However, if people try to adapt to the changes in the world, the will be able to save their place in the world. By this I mean, that adaptation calls for studying new. It is the only way to become better. Thus people have to study permanently; this is the way to be appropriate to the modern challenges. Moreover, if people stop studying, they almost lose all their chances to take place under the sun.
In addition, getting rapidly new information is important for everyday life as well, because those who do not study not move forward, they leave behind. Furthermore, the ability to study quickly involves choosing what to study, because where are surrounded by endless sources of information, for instance, the internet is such source. No one is able to learn everything from the Internet. It would take infinite time and the same amount of efforts. High performance is achievable if we are focused on something and do not spend our efforts for unnecessary things. Consequently, selecting what to study is essential for effective learning. Meanwhile, effective standing is a key to the modern world. This is the reason, why I feel that this skill is one of the most important.
To summarize, learning new is a crucial ability for everyday living. Only people, who are able to do it, are successful because they can handle current challenges.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, to begin with, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71306818182 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67497049252 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3726082883 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.95 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216123999703 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621481927552 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709399934659 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13582994885 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977577032558 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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