Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Can government fund the education of the entire country? Perhaps not. While government can fund partly, the education costs are too high to be provided entirely by the government. Teachers need to be paid and there are several costs required to main an institution.
To begin with, free education will lead to lack of income of teachers. The government can’t provide teachers completely. For instance, if the students do not pay fees, teachers will not be willing to work in the meagre income which government will provide. Teachers are the backbone of school. Thus, the education sector will start falling. So, adequate money is necessary for providing the required income. Without the student’s fees, this won’t be possible.
Furthermore, an institution requires funds for maintenance of its infrastructure. The building needs to be upgraded regularly. Research work also needs funds for carrying out experiments. The substances used cannot remain intact lifetime. For example, in chemistry lab, beakers, flasks and other such items break. Also, there is a need for continuous supply of chemicals. If a person is doing research, he will use a lot of substances for accurate results.
Some may argue that education is the basic necessity and therefore should not be charged. This may seem good but is not practical considering the enormous cost required for education. Students up to a certain age can be educated free of cost. The senior students should pay atleast the bare minimum. They can do part time jobs.
To sum up, it is nearly impossible for government to provide free education to all students. Each of the two should pay for proper functioning of education system. Education should be free up to an limit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...tances for accurate results. Some may argue that education is the basic necessity a...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...y atleast the bare minimum. They can do part time jobs. To sum up, it is nearly impossib...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... system. Education should be free up to an limit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14184397163 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82391541387 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.880357405 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 118.986275619 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.28 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15603213791 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451302076067 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386032552691 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959843702353 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460237380467 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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