Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Now-a-days many universities are taking a lot of money as fees and donation and selling education for non deserving candidates.but instead of this universities should consider the students who deserve it and should separately dedicate some seats for the students who cannot afford tuition.The government should first implement this free education and hen slowly take it into the private universities. The government should make it compulsory to allot some of the seats to the poor students who deserve but cannot afford it ,so that the state develops which leads to country growth.
Firstly,every state consists of students who cannot afford for the tuition , for those students government should bring a new scheme where government should conduct some survey and know about the worthy students and offer them with free education.The survey doesn't mean only conducting some exam but also family income, student IQ levels and offer them a scholarship for their education.government can also look into another scheme where there will be NGO's who would like to invest in poor people education and later the same NGO's can recruit the students into their companies as a great asset. these NGO's can also invest in some shares and give the profit for the education of students which is both advantage for student as well as NGO.Even these NGO's can suggest a particular course for the student which he requires in his company and directly recruit him instead of conducting interviews where many of the people these days are keeping fake documents.
government should also bring awareness among the students to study.There will be some parents who make their children to go to the child labour for their personal needs.government should take some action on such parents and with help of some social workers they can know about these issues and make children go to the government schools and colleges so that the state develops.government should also open a new bank account like CM funds account during floods to collect money people who whole heartedly wants to donate to the poor students. also instead of continuous theory classes universities can bring in more practical sessions so more students will be attracted to the education.
Finally , in my opinion its all the government that needs to take care of students in the country because todays students are tomorrows citizens of the country.Because of free education each and every person can study and do some work for their livelihood.
Even the help from the NGO's , social workers are a great asset for the future deserving poor candidates.so the government should take these responsibilities and bring more schemes for the welfare of students and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, look, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15681818182 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85591678255 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461363636364 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.867732389 60.3974514979 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.625 118.986275619 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 23.4991977007 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281527880318 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147771627135 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726339310767 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174192103583 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781536251547 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 14.1392134831 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 48.8420337079 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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