Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Education is or right and to be educated is our duty. Education is also necessary for the growth and development of the country. Educated people serve more to the country and make the country developed, proud and beautiful. But today’s education has become cost effective. The college, where students gain knowledge of their life, which is not only the studies of their field but also learn the lessons about how to conduct and control their life. There are many families which cannot afford to pay the college fees for their children and do not send them to colleges for higher education.
The government should offer a free education to the students who have poor financial condition. On the contrary, admission procedure can be done on the basis of the merit only and the free education can be offered to the students who have weaker family on financial basis. There is the example of the country, Germany where the government colleges have no tuition fees. So the fees are very negligible and affordable to the citizens of the country. They offer admission totally on the basis of merit. So the students who have higher marit and have poor condition get the motivation for higher studies. Thus the country can get intelligent students.
The country would get good Engineers, Doctors, Artists, Managers, Technicians, and good educated citizens. This can happen if the country motivates the intelligent students by offering no tuition fees. The colleges will get more and more admission as more students will apply for it. The government can take some other service from those students in place of the fees so that the colleges could cope up with more admissions. The studies have been actually costly due to the advancements f the campus, education system, practical labs, tools, machines, electrical devices, etc. so government has to give some funds to the colleges otherwise this scheme will not be affordable to the government.
Education fee cannot be redeemed by the private colleges as they cannot afford the higher cost of education per student on themselves. So the admission there for the poor family students and having lower merit cannot be done. This will motivate the students to work hard and gain higher merit to get admission for higher studies. So again the benefit to the citizens and the country that students who do not take studies as important will start studying hard.
The government will get the services of the these students back also when they serve the society by becoming adorable and intelligent doctors, engineers, police officers, etc. This will be beneficial to the country in future. The country will develop faster and gain its dignity and power with educated citizens living in.
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Education is or right and to be educated...
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... get the motivation for higher studies. Thus the country can get intelligent student...
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...ountry can get intelligent students. The country would get good Engineers, Do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, thus, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03752759382 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5635327327 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439293598234 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6283498002 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7692307692 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19230769231 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23574040792 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731861026722 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742736180565 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13815593428 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688656180767 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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