Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

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Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

The issue statement says that there should be free university education for any student by the governement, who can not afford the tuition after admitted to a univeristy. I completely adhere to this satement and reasons for my adherence are : Every person deserves to get the education to reach on a higher social strata, education is must for the overall development of a country and to decrease the social inequalties. These reasons along with examples are dilineated below :
Firstly, education is the right of every person. Education is very must for the person belonging to any caste, any religion or whether he is rich or poor. It the first basic thing, which provides the podium to rise in a society. But many people in gthe nation are deprived of this education due to higher fee structure in universities so they have to discontinue their studies in between only due to the non-payment of their fee. So, to help the impoverished people government should initiate programmes, design policies to provide free education to to the students who are admitted to the university but are not able to pay their academic fee.
Secondly, for the overal development and progress of the nation it is essential that nation should have a high literacy rate only then nation will able to compete in recent time due to increase in Globalisation and competetion between the countries. For instance, Consider the case of USA, there is higehr level of literacy rate and there is free education for every kid who can not afford to pay their fee, as a result in companies there is a higher amount of skilled, educated employees, so progress of the nation depends on how much literacy rate of a country is. Who is responsible for providing education? It is government. Education should be included the annual budgets of the nation. It should be highly priortise because with help of education a person will be able to get a reputable job, get good income and the poverty rate will decrease which is very much common in countries like India. S, poverty rate is very much related to the illiteracy rate. SO, free education should be on the top of the propoganda of every political party and government.
Last but not the least, when there the universities charge higher fee, only the rich people will be able to pay their fee, as a result poor will not be able to continue their studies which will result in increase in social inequalities, as a result only rich will be able to study and only rich people will get entrenched to the higher positions in every fields such as doctors, engineers, professors, judges etc so there will be more gap between the rich and poor. Rich will become more rich and poor will become more poor. Indignent people will be jaundiced and there will be tendentious decisions against them in every field as a result, the progress of the nation be hampered.
So, in nutshell i would like to conclude that education is a necessity for every individual of the nation and the government should design policies to provide free education to those who can not afford to studyy in universities for higher education.Othherwise, it will be very detrimental for the progress of the nation as well as the country people.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2666.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79496402878 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75940041847 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.392086330935 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 875.7 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.309121028 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.315789474 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2631578947 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226364853699 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960744285091 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121527013044 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172962222743 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907622870178 0.0667264976115 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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