Many People Visit Museums When They Travel To New Places. Why Do You Think People Visit Museums? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.
As we all know that museums are the representative of the heritage of any country. Old traditional values and cultures are well preserved in these museums. While the purpose of visiting to museums vary from person to person and their needs. In my opinion the reason behind visiting of people may be to know the history of that country, to know about their cultures and traditions and may be to check the speciaility of that museum. These reasons are delineated below with examples;
Firstly, as all the traditions of one's country are well kept in the museums and these things represent and displays their history. Moreover museums also display the civilization that has occur in that area. For instance, while my tour to south India I have visited the Salarjung museum at where different weapons that were used in war were shown in great manner along with their written specifications.
Secondly, in almost all the countries over the world each part of the country have the museum which represent their culture and religion. For instance, Virasat-e-khalsa in punjab shows the sikh history about their religion and culture. In this way the museums are representative of the culture and religion.
Last but not least, some museums are world wide famous for their some some special feature. For example, if any body have chance to visit london he will never miss to visit Madam tussad museum located in the london. As, this museum is famous for statues made of all the great personalities in the world. So, speciality of the museum may be the reason for the visit of the people.
To sum up, reason behind the visit of the individual as stated above may be to know about the history of that place, to get the information regarding their culture and traditions or may be the greatness of the museum. Furthermore, along with this some people may be fond of visiting museums like just for hobby purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83128834356 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58880622071 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478527607362 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0560903456 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4375 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22068235688 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087736868476 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524876133335 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136936634593 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438035677896 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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