Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In current times, people travelling to another countries is becoming popular, as the world is rapidly changing and developing. Among recreational places, art galleries or scenic views, lots of travellers also fancy selecting museums in order to visit and enjoy. Personally, I feel this way for several reasons, which I will outline in this following essay.
To begin with, the designs of historical sites are usually based on a country's architectural style. Therefore, these are ideal places to take an experience for tourist. they can contemplate unique and historical objects, artifacts and paintings. For instance, millions of individuals choose The Louvre museum during the exhilarating trip to France not just because it exhibits a tremendous collection of priceless national masterpieces but also because it is a prime example of the appeal of French architecture. Secondly, it is a captivating opportunity to get access and learn about the history of the nation they are currently visiting. While eyeing disparate and historical items, viewers will go back to the former past in order to completely witness and broaden their horizons through a colossal range of precious pictures, historical events and remnants from colonial days, as well as to be overwhelmed by the magnificence of civilization and achievements those countries created.
Thirdly, these days, young generations are incline to get bored with history at school. Accordingly, leading youngsters to museums is an amazing way for them to acquire knowledge and love history again. Specifically speaking, sightseers could be caused to have a strong sense of patriotism for their countries, which can be seen as a positive educational effect.
To sum up, visitors are deeply into taking a visit to museums because of their enjoyable aspects and the pleasant benefits it offers, such as providing historical learning, bring people to the magnanimous events in the past and arise the pride of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38834951456 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00158628373 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637540453074 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0423004778 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 5.45110844103 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14234288217 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440078257418 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512525432254 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907141566717 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484373158816 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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