A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The author states that all the students of a nation should study the same national circulum unil they enter college. As we all know that education is of prime importance for every nation, and government should be well aware about all the study related issues in the whole country. According to my opinion this is very true but in certain cases recommendation doesn't fit well. My point of view is explained below;
Firstly, as the author states that national curriculum should be same for all the students until they reach the college level. I do agree with this statement, as by following this thing the knowledge of all the students in the nation will be same, and everyone can participate in any entrance test of national level. This thing will remove the biasness from the study level, all students will be provided the same study material. Moreover, if any student want twent for studing in any other part of same country he/she will not encounter much problem due to same basic level.
Secondly, the reason of mine not being satisfied with this statement is that as every part of the country has their own cultural values and their own native language. In large country like India, where there is diversity of languages it is not good point to teach all the languages in the country and though it will be difficult process. Therefore, every part of the nation has to provide a different study curriculum through which they can inculcate their traditional values in the students and make them go through the knowledge of their native language.
Last but not least, the national curriculum should be same for all the students for a nation but only for subjects like science and maths whose concepts are same everywhere but in case of language subjects it should be different.However, one national language or the language which is accepted worldwide should be included in national curriculum and it should be mandatory for every student to study. As by doing so it will be easy for the student to visit any part of the world and talk to there native people.
To sum i restate that the national curriculum should be same at the national level until college level as this will make easy for the students to pursue graduation degree in any part of the nation. But in case of subjects which teach about the traditional culture and about native language it should be different from state to state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50096135362 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423076923077 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6542342545 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.714285714 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418560998664 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176713262784 0.0831039109588 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16511025633 0.0758088955206 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269107326894 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922686550407 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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