When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings.
As the historical buildings are the repersentative of the richness of country's heritage, they are of very prestige value with which the emotions and feelings of the people are connected. According to the issue instead of maintaining these buildings one should go for the modernization by using that place for other purpose. At the first in my perception, it will not be good to do this but under certain cases it might become necessary.
Firstly, i do not agree with the statement that we should not go for modernization by destructing these historical monuments as feelings and emotions of many people are connected with a particular place. For example in India one of the most famous and beautiful monument which is characterised for its beauty and design in all over the world. This place is taken as the symbol of love. Moreover, many historical monuments like temples, palaces etc. which are main center of tourists visit are very important as this leads to rise in country's national economy.
Secondly, there is the other point of view which says we should go for modernization by using such places instead of spending on their presevrance. As our country is very rich in heritage, there are number of religious places and palaces which are kept shut and even no one visit there. And thus these are just increasing cost nothing else and better utilization of that place can be done by making it available for some useful purpose. Moreover, India is a over populated country these historical buildings provide space where some factories or industries can be established.
Last but not least, any action taken about these historical buildings must be taken by keeping in citizen's opinion and the value of that building. As everything is need to be rejuvinated, it may be possible by spending a amount and making it suitable place for tourism can also be a available alternative by which both people and government will be satisfied.
To sum up i conclude that modernization of the historical buildings should be done in such a way that both the heritage of the country and economy of the country should be maintained. By this way the importance of historical place will increase many field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91129032258 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82770528133 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47311827957 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9204363124 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1875 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279295797108 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919712857334 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733291361637 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178859244006 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337795783524 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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