Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Going back to the developments that are done in past centuries there are few hindered movements that have taken place.For example plague where a huge number of people got
attacked by these.Therefore,there should be some preliminary restrictions that has to be aroused in research and development.Particularly,in scientific field though the
research is done for advances but it could also produce adverse effects. Considering the present situation of Covid where goverment has restriced people from the
surrondings,likewise there should be few considerations in research.
Research is although done considering all the measures but in practise we don't know how it evolves.For example robots, where it could actually be used for
military forces,medical improvements and in many other fields.Considering the military forces robots could safegaurd the people only if it is programmed
in such a way where it could understand the instructions of people.This could lead to a questions understanding instrucions of every person present in the force
irrespective of for and opposite commanders where it could lead to a condition to work for the necessary people.As also mentioned, in the field of medicine they
are vast changes that are upbringing in development but there must be always a check whether whoever is using or on whom ever it is applied it shouldn't be a
counterpart.
Life is made possible even on air , water with advancements in the technology which brings in the aircrafts,submarines.For example aeroplanes when landed due to
indigestible reasons could make a crash sometimes this cannot be avoided.Therefore a restriction in development could also lead to a safety measure by implanting
precautive measure inside the craft and educating the people like usually air hostess do as soon as the bording steps in.Same is the case with submarines.A check
should be thought as a precaution to avoid the break.But in the real world,restriction actually sounds like stopping which should be undertood like stopping from
the negative treat that we get if caused any.
As said,Technology can be both a boon and a bane there can be altering effects too which is a deviation from the expected.Years of hardwork and dedication is kept
in bringing the enhancement a bit mindfulness is always important which comes in the form of restrictions that has to be kept if necessary to ameliorate the next
happenings which is always like "Prevention is better than cure".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, likewise, so, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43076923077 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72685787057 2.79657885939 133% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541025641026 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 23.0359550562 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.305362508 60.3974514979 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 423.6 118.986275619 356% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 23.4991977007 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.21951772744 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156442614395 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105358089433 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820342042466 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525696763381 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693061187335 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.1 14.1392134831 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.15 48.8420337079 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 12.1743820225 287% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.4 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.63 8.38706741573 139% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 33.2 11.2143820225 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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