Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development

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Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.

Should governments put limitations on scientific researches? Some assert that governments should place restrictions and rules on scientific projects for regulating researchers harmful and unethical experiments. While others proclaim that research projects should be lead by professionals instead by laypersons. I believe the both opinions could be beneficial to scientific research and development, thus cooperating the contradicting parties' positions together is a better way to discuss the question.

On the one hand, restrictions on research are prompted largely. Researching staff are group of people whose inherent mood and personal quality are diverse to promise no errs in their studies. Experiment data or methodology flaws are confusing for experimenters but they are adaptable and discernable , once any one of them conducting chemical or related dangerous experiments has some mental maladies and nefarious purpose, the resulting consequences are unable for human-beings to take. Just like the plan of Manhattan, from which the nuclear weapons were invented, if without the supervision of American government, they might be exploited to serve to certain unimaginable purpose.

On the other hand, glut limitation on research projects obstacles their natural growth. The extent of restriction is like two statement of societies, capitalism and socialism, and over restriction is the latter one, which evades with characteristics that are country-dominant, collective and irrefutable. The biggest downside of that is the far more greater possibility being false under the lead by laypersons, that is, officials.

However, singly speaking both of the two will inevitably leads to an extreme situation. The scientific research should be guide by governments' special departments within certain extent. For example, the governmental department gives suggestion and predilections to related researching institutions after studying the context of the country, by doing so could reduce the opportunity cost that could be make when institutions head to wrong researching way, while increasing the value of researching projects because the relating results are suitably align to gaps provided by special department beforehand. Thus there is an equilibrium for the government and the researching institutions. For example, China is doing such the best in the world as the biggest socialism country. There are a number of branches under a core department called Chinese Technology institution, which specializes on aligning scientific results with the demand of current China. Such instances are not only produced by China's special social properties, but also by its developing situation. China could not act like United States, where the connection between industry and education is highly matured, China's education generally are less sensitive to changes in industries, though small part of them are in the top in the world.

In sum, scientific research is necessary to a country's development, and whether it should be restricted by the government is decided on the country's situation, even for developed country the indications from governments on some sensitive and secretive researches are still evasive. Therefore, I individually more support to put restrictions on scientific research, but only within reasonable extent.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2848.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 490.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81224489796 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23882842735 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567346938776 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 873.9 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0432135401 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.619047619 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342943832654 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111126361639 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115908913214 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202027227104 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125014190307 0.0667264976115 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.1639044944 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 100.480337079 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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