Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develop

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Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the
recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

In today's world, Scientific research and development is very essential parameter for any developing country in order to attract attention globally, and therefore there should not be any restrictions on research and development.
By placing few restrictions on scientific research and development, Government will limit the chances of successful and valuable inventions or studies which might be beneficial not only to the specific country's population but also to the overall humankind. On the global platform, country will need to be dependent on the foreign research and developments which will downgrade the country's reputation and this will be the biggest obstacle for the developing countries to become a developed ones.
In addition to above reasons, one more important drawback of placing restrictions on the scientific studies is that talented individuals who are studying hard and putting their valuable time into scientific studies will get attracted to the foreign countries which will reduce the talent pool of the country and ultimately these talented brains will migrate to the other foreign countries to pursue their desire professions.
However, the probable positive by placing few restrictions on scientific research and development is that it will benefit the country on financial and environmental front if these restrictions includes some environmental restrictions on scientific development which will lower the different types of pollutions and then naturally beneficial financially as well.
So to conclude, I will be on the side that governments should not place any restrictions on scientific studies in order to flourish globally. Scientific research and development is the key factor if any country want to progress on any front and will not be dependent on the other countries.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60583941606 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.143113496 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.5857977475 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.428571429 118.986275619 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1428571429 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.21951772744 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243804664506 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152321533095 0.0831039109588 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515809521588 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172557794733 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593558648389 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 14.1392134831 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 48.8420337079 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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