Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
restrictions on scientific research and development may have far reaching effects on the development of a country. The prompt recommends that the government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research. In my opinion, I partially agree with the aforementioned suggestion and argue that the requirement of such rules and regulations depends on the below three factors.
First of all, while it is true that scientific research is used for advancing the human race and alleviating our day to day problems such as health issues, it is also true that there have been instances throught history where such knowledge is used for malacious activities. For example, althought the inventor of the TNT wanted it to be used for positive impact on society, it was eventually used in bombs causing massive destruction over vast areas. Another such example is the discovery of radioactivity wherein lies the secret for harnessing clean nuclear energy and decimating cities. The atomic bomb dropped in Fukushima, japan had not only razed the city to the ground but also had deleterious effects on the future generations of japan. Authorisations around fields of scientific research that my cause large scale damage must be strict and severe actions must be taken against those who flout these rules. if such rules are not created, any malevolent entity may be a source of large scale destruction of property and almost permenant damage to countries and to mother earth.
Second, rules around maintainance of hight standards of quality -- througout the scientific research and development --must be created and enforced so as to avoid any disasters. Histroy has taught us that flouting of such rules leads to irreversible damage, a prime example of which is the Chernobyl disaster. such disasters not only impact the upcoming generations but also require billions of dollars to correct. Wherever scientific research may be seemed dangerous -- like genetic research and nuclear research -- it becomes imperative to adhere to the highest standards of quality. Consequently, government intervention in terms of strict rules and regulations in such fields of study is completely warranted.
Last but not the least, too many regulations may hinder not only the scientific expansion of the country but also may impact it finances over a long period. For instance, think of a situation wherein the government has forcibly shut down all private research labs. This would impede all medical research say research for medicines against chronic diseases like cancer. diseased patients would die at a younger age due to lack of proper medical facilities and the country would eventually suffer. Furthermore, such a country is not equiped to handle any epidemic outbursts which may cripple the population and financial position of the country in the long run.
In conclusion, the aforementioned convoluted issue must be carefully analysed and while there are no easy answers to the complext issue at hand, we must strive to build a safe environment conducive to scientific research positively impacting the society at large, for if the government does not do so, the government imperils the entire nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Restrictions
restrictions on scientific research and development ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...en against those who flout these rules. if such rules are not created, any malevol...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...elopment --must be created and enforced so as to avoid any disasters. Histroy has taught...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...ple of which is the Chernobyl disaster. such disasters not only impact the upcoming ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Diseased
...s against chronic diseases like cancer. diseased patients would die at a younger age due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33136094675 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90987857311 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534516765286 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3362668823 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.15 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.35 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188773510512 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624350375316 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657342820879 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121036509587 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719968418478 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.