The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In de

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The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The human mind and machine superior have always been controversial issues in recent years. Due to advancements in technology, machines are improving every day and now they can do much more than before. So, some may believe machines are superior to the human mind. In my point of view, the human mind has more abilities than machines for two reasons.
First of all, machines are designed by humans, and how much they are intelligent shows the intelligence of inventors. In the other words, the abilities of the machine are a sign of the inventor's mental ability. As the statement mentioned, they are just tools that human invents to make their jobs easier. For example, a calculator may do some mathematical operation much faster than a human but it does not mean the superior of the calculator to the human. It shows the human intelligence that uses some tools to facile and expedites his or her work.
Moreover, even we consider machines as the latest supercomputers; again human mind is superior to machines. Because these computers are designed by humans and they tried to transfer their ideas and point of view in solving problems to computers. So, computers do not have any independent view, and their views inheritance from human minds. For instance, during the past decades, we can find a lot of problems and scientific questions solved by changing the views on the problem. We can name the discovery of vaccines that scientists find a new way of fighting diseases while it may not happen in computers. Computers just search between different solutions that are designed for.
On the other hand, some maintain some machines like supercomputers could defeat humans and it is an indication of the superiority of machines. For example, they claim some supercomputers that not only could defeat ordinary people but also could win against some masters. However, this example shows the advancement of computers but not the superiority of computers to the human mind. Because supercomputers can search between thousands of solutions faster than humans and they could not design a new solution. In addition, supercomputers fail to win against some masters anyway.
In conclusion, in my point of view, although machines and especially supercomputers have fast advanced in recent decades, the human mind is superior to machines due to the ability of the human to think to the problems in different views if necessary.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0626566416 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85851657606 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453634085213 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1597692581 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1904761905 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19047619048 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237897005085 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876261527578 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680092896427 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159071636842 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553263363192 0.0667264976115 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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