The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
The pace of life is increasing manifold especially since last two decades. As our life is becoming more comfortable, it is getting more complicated at the same time. Thus, the statement that the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problem than it solves is agreeable despite the comforts this pace of life bring with it.
The increase in the pace of life is due to many interdependent factors, out of which technological development is a core one. Considering its manifold advantages, one is tempted to think against the argument. After all, advancements in transport, communication, computer technology, etc. have led to a high-standard of modern life. Private cars and various modes of transport have made commuting faster and increased the radius of the life; nobody in the world is a stranger now but a friend not yet contacted thanks to the social media; high-tech computer have enabled faster calculation of complex problems, massive information gathering and onerous word processing; myriad gadgets right from the washing machine to dish washer have made daily home chores a matter of minutes; and so on. Despite these comforts, as discussed below, the pace of modern life has done more harm than good.
The most affected aspect of our life due to its rapid pace today is our own health. Because of the changes in our lifestyle, we hardly have any time for exercise, recreation or indulgence. There is seldom any chance to relax, and even if we do get time, thanks to the smart phones and the laptops, we are rarely out of reach and out of occupation. A question we must address is: “How many times have we socialized with our friends without any unexpected call to interrupt?” Even on weekends, immersed in the convenience of home delivery and the pleasure of video games; majority of the people are less inclined to go out of home to exercise and breathe fresh air. The overall result is the decline in our physical and psychological well-being.
Moreover, the rapid pace of society has led to furious competition and increased sense of insecurity forcing many people to bear unimaginable pressure to save their jobs and maintain their living. We are constantly working and racing against time to outdo each other and rise higher, earn more and have more of everything. Unable to cope with this competition, pace and pressure, more and more people are suffering from depression and anxieties, as also reflected by higher number of suicide cases compared to say twenty years before. This is the vicious reality of modern fast-paced life.
The increasing pace of the world has also harmed the environment in many ways. To cater for increasing demands and needs of the society for food, electricity, transport, gadgets, etc., more and more fossil fuel is being burned through the manufacturing industries, power plants, vehicles, etc. Products and devices are being manufactured at fastest possible rate and minimum market cost with complete disregard to the environmental consequences vis-à-vis contaminated rivers, spoiled agricultural and forest lands, polluted river and what not. The resulting global warming, which heats the earth’s atmosphere, now threatens the very existence of human civilization.
In conclusion, though the increasingly rapid pace of the life today has brought many comforts and luxuries; it has created more problems than it has served mainly because of our own shortcomings and decadent humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2932.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22638146168 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90988813305 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559714795009 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 929.7 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.777566032 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.47826087 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3913043478 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82608695652 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388769232366 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113856577913 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133641307413 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238677351276 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168847735108 0.0667264976115 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 100.480337079 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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