People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Some people avoid risky actions and prefer to stay in their comfort zone instead of taking chance and try to thrive their life. They may fear to loss whatever they have instead of gain more. Risky actions, however, have consequences that should be considered before taking action, but staying in one place to avoid potential consequences is not reasonable. Thus, I agree with argument that risky actions should have done after considering aftermath carefully, and I will explain my reasons now.
First of all, taking risk has always had huge advantages for humankind. For instance, discovery of America could mention as a huge achievement by taking risk by Cristophe Colomb. America has done a lot for the world after discovery and it is the result of taking chance. Staying in comfort zone and afraid of finding new places could lead to lethargic behavior for people.
However, considering the consequences of the risky actions is crucial. Without thinking about upshots, people may face some problems that is not correctable. For instance, a person who invest all of his money in the stock market in the hope of taking advantage may have face some disaster and lose all of his money, because we can find a lot of situation that stock market plummeted in the history. On the other hand, Warren Buffett who is one of the richest person in the world, have gained all of his money from investing in the stock market. What he did professionally is considering the consequences of the risky actions that wanted to do. Then if the potential advantages are more significant than consequences he would take the chance.
On the other hand, some people consider risky action as gambling. Taking risk due to excitement feeling has always been interesting. As you may find a lot of people in the history that gamble not for gaining money for just feeling the excitement situation. However, they face with uncorrectable consequences in their life like bankruptcy, divorce and like that. The main reason of this consequences is that they did not think about the consequences of their actions.
In conclusion, although taking risks and doing risky actions have had several achievements for humankind, considering the consequences of actions is an indivisible part of risky actions. Warren Buffett could be an example of a person that consider about his risky actions and lead him to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...n the hope of taking advantage may have face some disaster and lose all of his money...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of situations'.
Suggestion: a lot of situations
...e all of his money, because we can find a lot of situation that stock market plummeted in the hist...
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Line 4, column 381, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...vorce and like that. The main reason of this consequences is that they did not think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73508724617 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468513853904 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.001081039 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5238095238 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279453802829 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906496528394 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584624218051 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164492038556 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637827094779 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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