In some educational systems, children are required to study one or more foreign languages. In others, foreign language study is not a requirement. What are the potential benefits of foreign language study? Do you think foreign language study is an important part of education?
There are different opinions toward the necessity of studying foreign language in educational system. Some agree that it plays a fundamental role in the educational future of learners and the educational systems must have plans in this case while others believe that the advantages of learning foreign languages is negligible compared to other learning plans. So, it must not considered as a requirements in educational systems.
In my opinion, it will be one of the best plans in educational systems to encourage new generation in order to learn one or more foreign languages other than their mother tongue. As a matter of fact, since the globe is paving the route of growth, countries tend to communicate with each other in different aspects, in this case, a common language would be the first and the most important means for communication. So, preparing a skilled new generation which can help to achieve the goal of communication is one of the most important advantage of studying foreign languages.
On the other hand, studying new languages will broaden the view points of learners about the cultural, social and some other specifications of countries in which the considered language is spoken.
In addition to, learning new languages often leads to eager for knowing new people from different countries.
In conclusion, despite of some disagreements toward studying foreign languages, if the learning process focuse on applicable languages, it positively affect the governments and the learners. In fact, it has not only helps countries in their future international communications but also would be interesting in various aspects for learners.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... on applicable languages, it positively affect the governments and the learners. In fa...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ffect the governments and the learners. In fact, it has not only helps countries i...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...tional communications but also would be interesting in various aspects for learners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32824427481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04845012927 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530534351145 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6021201016 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387319232601 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16292660922 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112670273268 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205896947831 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106499196789 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... on applicable languages, it positively affect the governments and the learners. In fa...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ffect the governments and the learners. In fact, it has not only helps countries i...
^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...tional communications but also would be interesting in various aspects for learners.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32824427481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04845012927 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530534351145 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6021201016 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387319232601 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16292660922 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112670273268 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205896947831 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106499196789 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.