In some educational systems, children are required to study one or more foreign languages. In others, foreign language study is not a requirement. What are the potential benefits of foreign language study? Do you think foreign language study is an important part of education?
Education system of countries has always been a controversial issue and learning foreign languages at school is a specific topic that parents, students and teachers have diverse opinions. They have different ideas about its benefits and importance. I will express my idea about this issue now.
Experts believe learning foreign tongues have several advantages. Firstly, it could expand brain abilities. By learning a new language, you can take advantage of some parts of your mind that was idle. Another benefit is that students could get familiar with other cultures. If pupils could watch movies with foreign languages, they indirectly understand their cultures. This effect can even increase by reading books and magazines.
Turning to the importance of learning abroad language, present era is named as world village. It means people are communicating with each other more than all the past civilization history. To have progress in the aforementioned world, we should know a foreign language. Understanding a foreign language not only enhance countries’ economy by increasing trade, but also could help them to live in peace by implementing diplomacy and avoiding misunderstanding. Also, to acquire the latest knowledge, knowing foreign languages is necessary. As an example, paint industry mostly has been improved in Germany. As the provided material and contexts are usually in Dutch, fluency in that is a must for enthusiasts. On the other hand, some may weaken this idea by exemplify online translator websites like Google. Although these sites are really beneficial, they are not perfect and may lose some meaning during translation and slow you path.
To sum up, I believe, there are several advantages for learning abroad languages like becoming familiar with other cultures and improving our brains’ abilities. Some may believe by using online translator, the importance of learning new languages reduced. However, I reckon, these online services have some problems and may waste your time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...proving our brains’ abilities. Some may believe by using online translator, the importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, thus, i reckon, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46945337621 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85162417305 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633440514469 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1978666191 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22083939073 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059284314235 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578251671384 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130135336602 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335846700699 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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