Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The role of traditinal culture in countries and native cultures has always been hot debate among people. Thus, governors in different countries try to assign funds to cultural activities to keep them safe or flourish them. The calim maintains governments should provide adequate financial support for big cities to assure their thrive. The reason it provides is that major cities are the places that can preserve the traditional culture and generete the new ones. I mostly agree with them and I explain my reasons now.
First of all, major cities are mixture of people from all around the cities and villages around the country. People come from around the country with their traditions and try to do according them on major cities. For inctance, people in Tehran, the capital of Iran, are gatherd from various cities and in any traditional ceremony you cn find different types in different locations. I can name Ashora that Kashan natives has special place for this ceremony. Thus, By providing adequate funds by the government the preserving of this tradition would be approved.
Moreover, major cities are the location of differet cultural activities ranging from theatre, cinema to conferences and carnavals. In these cities you can find major publication companies that are working on publishing books, magazines, or newspapers. Thus, major cities due the provided facilities could help the country to generate new cultural activities or preserve traditional ones. For example, New York in a good sample of cities with noumerous cultural events from not only inside the United Stated but also around the world. It us host of varoius conferences, ceremonies and cultural activities. Therefore government by providing adequate financial support not only preserved traditions and propose new cultural activities but also can improve financial situation of cities because some these activities have financial benefits for the city.
On the other hand, some may cliam that origin of most traditions are in the villages and small cities and major cities instead of peserving that, destroying old one and present new ones. They maintain, if governments want to preserve traditional culture, they should concentrate on villages with special culture. Although we can find some culture in villages that are specific for that area and they are endanger of extinction, they are just some excemption and we could not generalize them for all of the country.
In conclusion, I believe major cities could assure to preserve traditionaal culture in the country if they have enough funds, so governer should provide adequate money for this purposes. Some may claim some villages have special cultures and are more important than major cities. However, it happens in exceptional situations and should not be considered as general rule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30803571429 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66603838727 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1098750436 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307236652839 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994923869362 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650389155592 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187306675874 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431112597225 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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