The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
The life has indeed become complex for some while for others, it still remains a constant journey for acquiring their basic needs such as foods and clothes. The ever-developing technology surely has created some problems but their numerous benefits outweigh these problems. Let us consider both aspects in details.
First, let us analyze the obvious problems with today's ever-pacing lifestyle. There is a substantial increase in the competition in most aspects of the life primarily due to the scarcity of resources to meet the need of all consumers. Such a system has sparked a sense of competition in individuals aspiring to win it. For example, in business, nowadays, there is an enormous competition that significantly affects the business personnel, employees, and their families. Other consequences are significant reduction in the available time for self-care, and for their families. The former has affected their health considerably while the latter has negatively influenced relationships. Both of these back-affect individuals for worse.
What is the reason for this increased life-pace. The major factor, in my opinion, is the ever-increasing technological innovations and developments that necessitates the parallel human development. Thus, to arrive at a more cogent conclusion, it is necessary to consider the benefits of the technology as well.
The technology generally has made our life much more convenient and easy. Things that erstwhile require considerable human efforts are now being performed by machines. The next big in technological sphere is the artificial intelligence which has pushed the possibilities of what can be achieved through automations. Technology and scientific research has made it possible to diagnose and treat many maladies that once were not known to human beings. The communication technology has made the communication so simple and convenient that a person thousands of mile away can now be reached with a tap on a mobile phone. Hence, technology remains the power-engine behind these possibilities that have inordinately ameliorated human lifestyle. Next, the tech-giants are taking responsibility to tackle need-of-hour global problems like poverty, malnutrition, and global warming.
It is for these reasons I believe that the miniscule of problems generated by the technological advancements cannot obscure their many benefits. Moreover, the problems that I discussed, at all odds, can exist if we would have to give up all these technologies. Instead of excoriating technologies for such harms, we should focus on using these technologies to tackle these problems.
In summary, I generally disagree with the idea that the fast-paced life has more problems than the benefits. We therefore have to hope for using technology to fix the problems, not criticizing technology that has drastically improved human lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64597701149 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28114194391 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542528735632 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2460153776 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.24 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150170881491 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480520010096 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761686292565 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926912375597 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565933129333 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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