issue about officials must maintain the highest ethics and moral standard

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issue about officials must maintain the highest ethics and moral standard

Submitted by mbabar on Mon, 10/21/2019 - 02:59

this topic raises an issue of whether a public official must keep up the highest ethical and moral standard. indisputably an official has to face many obstacles if he keep up prime ethics and morality .Nevertheless, an official must keep up ethics and morality and those must be their prime priority.Thus, I strongly agree with the opinion that no matter what a public official must keep in mind that they never trade their ethics and morality in any situation.

First of all ethics and morality is very common value people should possess in their life so do officials.officials have the authority to take some crucial decision that will decide progress of many things. if they negotiate it , then people will be in great trouble.if they trade ethics and morality , it will endanger the surroundings. To illustrate, let us look at the an example like an official is given responsiblity to take care of a road construction work. contractor tries to negotiate with the officials so that he gives the all clearance and in turns he will receive some luxurious gift. if the official doesn't have ethics and morality, he may trade this and endanger the surroundings. due to his absence of morality , people of that locality will suffer in the long run. if he keep up morality and ethics, there will be no chance of corruption and people will be satisfied later.In this circumstances, obviously officials should have the highest ethics and morality. it is pretty obvious that officials can gain something trading their values. But for the betterment of the surrounding they must have those values.

Furthuremore an official sometimes may face enmity due to his high ethics and morality.sometimes sourrounding situation hinders you to trade those values. sometimes a group of people try to break someones morality to gain their business. still courageous officials take bold stand against them and keep safe their values. In addition , ethics and morality should be highest practised value of an officials.if they dont possess those values, they surely create turmoil and destroy the goodwill.

In conclusion, although officials face some issues if they keep up the highest ethics and morality, still they must hold the values in body and mind which will help to keep harmony among the surrounding and cross functional team.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09186351706 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8771272755 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46719160105 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2821889801 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326785297907 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119721280792 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103013046206 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227209007727 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981754029571 0.0667264976115 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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