Issue writing
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Well, use of technology will differ with the person to person some might use it when necessary while others may use regularly. Having said that I think technologies should be used to solve the problems.We have some problems in our surrounding which need us to be equipped with technology to solve.
Nowadays technology is helping the human race to solve the problems in most time and cost effective manner which leading to human development and evolution. Let's consider an example of travelling 500 miles distance back in the 19th century it was very difficult, Techonologicalcostly and time-consuming thing but now a day we have aeroplanes, locomotive advances which magically reduced the ti
Technological development is related to the socioeconomic well-being of any country. More the technology used more the smart workforce we have. This is why the use of technology is necessary. The growth in the information technology is the milestone for the human evolution. as people are leveraging this IT they are becoming more aware and intellectual by all means.
Having said above things, Every coin has two sides Using technology for like most simple task such as math calculation may lead to deteriorating your calculus quotient. Consider kid using a calculator for solving maths may not know about basic tactics about solving the problem.Using search engines like google or yahoo for just copy pasting the article, assignments or this without giving a second thought about whether the information is legitimate or not will lead to deprecate the ability of us to critically thinking and analysing.
Though technology has some drawbacks on its use but one should understand the correct use of technology. In today's world, technologial advances are really important to solve the mysterious problems such as solar systems evolution, DNA analysis along with increasing standard of living of all humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...basic tactics about solving the problem.Using search engines like google or yahoo for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, second, so, well, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31353135314 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07465023381 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.3802332189 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224738185055 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918897852518 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607568132509 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118335191554 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718596389734 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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