It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author of the issue highlights that if people compromise their beliefs, it might have a deleterious effect on their lives and it is better to cling to their tenets. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that human beings are born and grow older with their beliefs, which created and shaped their personalities. So, it is not a wise decision to compromise a belief. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal viewpoint.
To commence with, there is no doubt that people's beliefs play a key role in their personal lives and they act, make decisions and so forth, based on their beliefs. In fact, in any realm people prefer to take their deeds into consideration. Broadly speaking, our beliefs shaped our personality and identity, so, if we neglect our principles in our day to day life, it will certainly have a pernicious effect on our mind and lives. As a tangible example, vast majorities of people are respectful of their religious practices and rituals. If the community or other authorities prohibit the consumption of meaty-foods, people have to avoid such foods or shift their taste. Otherwise, compromise a belief and consume meaty foods might have a negative effect in the long run. To elucidate more on this issue, people's beliefs and principles are important in any given society owing to the fact that they provide an opportunity for individuals to lead a real life.
Another equally salient example in corroborating my stance is the fact that when a religious people are looking for a well-paid and decent job and finally seize the opportunity in a mammoth corporation, bribery is the crucial fact to make a progress and earn a living. If we take a minute to ponder over it, a person should accept or refute the proposal of bribery when it comes to principles and tenets. If a person wants to keep on his job, he should compromise his beliefs, otherwise, he has to leave the job in order to adhere to his own beliefs. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that in any situation or place, humans should be consistent with their beliefs and do not neglect them. If they compromise their deeds and tenets because of money or other things, they should wait for ruinous effects in the long run.
However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, people will not be forced to wait for their beliefs or compromise their principles. As a matter of fact, everything that complies with our logic will be definitely enough to make decisions act based on them. Refer to the logic not only can help people make the best and a sound decision but also can help people to make a progress day in day out without being critical of their own beliefs. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my point of view.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... However, what was alluded to above cant be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, well, as to, broadly speaking, in fact, no doubt, as a matter of fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2558.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7723880597 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76013493202 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9682061096 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.217391304 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3043478261 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993344438946 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327521982604 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025896739026 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607112821982 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106677760552 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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