Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The contemporary society has high expectations for our representatives. These expectations are sometime the gist that enables them to hold power but, their inner qualities such as compunction is also a substantial factor. Furthermore, these prominent being may overturn the current society and broaden our views and demands.
Admittedly, leaders may be elected due to the situations that make the decisions inevasible. In difficult times the public expect leaders that are pertinent to resolve the situation or at least mitigate it. For instance, even though the election of Donald Trump raised numerous controversies because of the lack of moral standards and some virulent remarks he showed in the presidential election, he was able to win due to the needs of the citizens of the US. They wanted somebody who could enhance the economy, and the aftermath of this demands resulted in a winner who used to be a corporate manager: somebody competent at business and finances. Therefore, the coherence between the leader's characteristics and public's demands seem lucid.
Nevertheless, in some cases he inherent traits of oneself may result somebody to step up as a leader. The status quo is not the only influence that determines a leader. The propitious traits of a person such as charisma, kindness, probity, a resolute attitude may all contribute in one becoming a authority. For instance, Chinziscan's ambition and charisma was essential in enabling him to conquer China and establish a gigantic empire. Consequently, the situation of a nation is not the only factor determining the prominent: individual's deftness is also important.
Finally, instead of the public demands shaping the leader, it could be the other way around. Specialists may present unprecedented notions into our society and thus change our expectations of the society. Steve Jobs for example, introduced several breakthroughs in the electronics market, altering our perception of these devices in a cataclysmic way: the invention of the I phone was revolutionary and changed how what we expect from mobile phones. Without Apple and Steve Jobs, we will be still checking E mails with our heavy laptops instead of devices that fits within our hands.
In conclusion, certain situations makes a election of a individual with certain capabilities necessary. However, the individual's inherent trait is also a significant factor to win votes. Moreover, innovative authorities might the change the public's cognition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hance the economy, and the aftermath of this demands resulted in a winner who used t...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tude may all contribute in one becoming a authority. For instance, Chinziscans am...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a cataclysmic way" with adverb for "cataclysmic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ltering our perception of these devices in a cataclysmic way: the invention of the I phone was revol...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
... in a cataclysmic way: the invention of the I phone was revolutionary and changed how...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...In conclusion, certain situations makes a election of a individual with certain c...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... certain situations makes a election of a individual with certain capabilities ne...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...vative authorities might the change the publics cognition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45103092784 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10866198873 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5555140415 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55 5.21951772744 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0592259253034 0.243740707755 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192852971502 0.0831039109588 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0165929381639 0.0758088955206 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307013002465 0.150359130593 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113561382189 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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