It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Hero is formed by many factors. Some say that it is impossible to regard a living person as a hero, while others hold the opposite opinion that there is more opportunities for a society to create living hero. Admittedly, it is common to see a person become a hero by the influence of media. However, I still strongly believe that it is not likely for modern people to be heroes which last forever. Those heroes may be soon degraded because of the rapid spread of information. In the following paragraphs, I will illustrate the idea from a social and a technological view of point.
To begin with, social media exposes scandals in order to make profit. By the expose of negative news, the so-called heroes soon become notorious and no one would regard them as heroes. Take Clinton for example. He was the president of United States who was widely respected as the economy thrived for a long period under his guidance. However, the once national hero soon became notorious because of his sexual affair which was exposed by the media. Therefore, the influence of modern social media makes people impossible to be heroes.
Second, being hero is difficult because of the advancement of technology. The advent of the Internet enables information to spread rapidly and quickly no matter the information is reliable or not. People who are not able to think critically would believe the news they receive without evaluating evidences. Heroes are smeared easily in such a way. For example, the prime minister of my country was accused of involving in a bribery last year. Though the event was resulted from an online fake news and he was soon proved to be innocent, many people still believe the fake news instead of solid evidence. Even though he was once regarded as a hero as he rejuvenated the domestic economy, many people regarded he as merely a avaricious politician. Therefore, the power of technology can destroy a hero.
Nevertheless, social media and technology may sometimes create hero. Both of the tools can manipulate the public impression. People can be respected widely and thus become heroes when the social media praise them openly through television or online channel. Though president Ma made several mistakes during his presidency, the social media praised him frequently on television. He was described as a hero who improved the severe air pollution in my country. The mistakes he has made, however, were forgiven by publics because the media kept propagating the idea that no one in fleckless. Therefore, it may still possible for a society to regard someone as hero.
In sum, I mostly agree with the idea that it is difficult for modern people to consider a person as a hero. In most of time, media and technology destroy a hero or even refrain the existence of hero. Nevertheless, those tools can sometimes produce polarized consequence which create hero in another way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY
Message: Did you mean 'there are more opportunities'?
Suggestion: there are more opportunities
...e others hold the opposite opinion that there is more opportunities for a society to create living hero. Ad...
Line 9, column 722, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...nomy, many people regarded he as merely a avaricious politician. Therefore, the p...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 488.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96516393443 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69411653563 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473360655738 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3135793837 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7666666667 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36666666667 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16811055525 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510123927588 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443775292645 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114943357376 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407306262184 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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