It is often necessary,even desirable,for political leaders to withhold information from the public.
I totally agree with the issue topic that emphasizes political leaders should rely on the information provide by the public .people make them leaders with the hope that their leaders can improve our demands with the better improvement of our basics needs for the generation to generation.they only dreams about their future carrier so, they choose their suitable candidates leaders which have great vision and motives about their country peoples.political leaders are so called great leaders if they can listen their supporter voice and make their wish true without violence following the concept of their peoples words.
Political leaders should collect their civics information what they arise their problem and smoothly decline their problem for the better development of their status.great political leaders always thinks about their peoples problem.so, they are hurried about to solve their arising problem and protect their civilians. There are many consequences and difficulties arises while going on for the development of country.Many peoples believe that their leader is with them along side which helps to minimize their problem.great leaders are always help to unite whole country peoples into one part.
Great popular and successful leader is taken his fame by his achievement of works towards his country in the favor of their civilians. Mahatma Gandhi is one of the greatest successful political leader from India which helps to unite the people without violence and bloodshed .Its main goal is to spread love and peace among the countries of people and all over the world.He was perhaps the greatest military genius in history because,he created the almighty weapons of non-violence.He always understood the public views and ideas and make them easy for their task.The powerful action of the greatest political leader is to unite the whole country people without discrimination,un-touchability and free from the british empire .He help to led them to a magnificent victory without deadly weapons and bloodshed.
so,political leaders should collect the information from the people to find out their problems which helps to lessen their problems and improve their quality in their living standards.A true political leader can make it so. By the detail probe towards the problem of country peoples which helps to minimize it quickly led them to a great politician vision and motives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44385026738 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90483626431 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478609625668 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.393857391 60.3974514979 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.857142857 118.986275619 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4285714286 23.4991977007 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171273823703 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923624877822 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549223917631 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12807002595 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155791669265 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 14.1392134831 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.8420337079 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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