It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Cities do their part to contribute in the preservation and generation of traditions but it is villages and semi urban areas where a full extent of traditional and cultural heritage can be enjoyed. The congested and fast paced life of cities may not leave much space and time for carrying out traditions the way they were originally. Thus, cities have a limited contribution in continuing or fabricating new traditions.
To begin with, cities are densely populated and lack the space for communal activities. Additionally, people in cities tend to be very busy. That is why the traditions in cities have a touch of brevity and levity.
However, its the country side where most of the traditions are fully exercised and valued, just the way they should be. People living in remote areas have harmonious lives. Most of the people in town tend to know each other and that is why any celebration is participated by maximum number of the peoples. They have ample amount of time to dedicate to cultural heritage.
Moreover, villages have all the necessary space, the life in village has not gone cozy in tiny apartments. Therefore, Social gatherings are more frequent in these areas as compared to cities. Take for an example, the event of Raavana Dahan in my country, it is the marking of end of an evil king who once kidnapped goddess Sita, during this a dummy of Raavana is burned. Such traditions require large empty grounds.
Additionally, several laws are exercised in cities, which interfere with celebrations, like you can't play loud music after 10 PM or Mass gathering have to be authorized by local administration. Such restrictions hamper organizing cultural events making them an arduous job in cities. It is therefore, that major populace does not take interest in such traditions. While in villages the ease of carrying out traditional events, helps in getting more people on-board.
Conclusively, cities and villages both do their part in inventing and preserving their cultures and traditions. But rustic parts of the country are the places where most of the cultural action is taking place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Line 10, column 97, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07449856734 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81928913528 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570200573066 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2857944365 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.55 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157084178922 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411622917844 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344523332746 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780089726777 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038833070551 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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