It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
It said that social groups are a way that through them people define themselves and others can know more about their personality. I agree with this point of view.
Social groups are a group of people in which we have an association with. According to psychology, individuals usually choose to join to groups that match their character. Therefore, in such groups people can better decipher the innate characteristics of others. For example, if the person is in the travel groups, in this way we can understand he or she likes travelling and socializing. In my experience, the influence of social groups on people is completely clear and it can be found in all of the stages of their lives.
When individuals born and are introduced into the world the first people whom they are familiarized with are their parents. Family is the first social group in which children are raised. Parent teach them about social norms, culture and manners. In other words, family is a group that form the initial personality of children. In such group, children try to form their character by imitating of those manners that they like rom their parents. So, it is expected that parents prepare their children for joining to other groups by telling them what behavior are expected to have out of home.
As time goes on, children are familiarized with school where the influence of peer groups is determined. In the school children learn to make friends with like mined individuals. In other words, peer groups are a group in which people learn to communicate with others and how to discuss with their friend about different subjects. Additionally, they learn about the value sharing things and helping each other. Peer groups has a strong influence on the personality of children, as at this age they like to fall into the line with their friends and to such that they accept the ideas of their friends, they don’t believe in their parents ‘idea.
In the adult working life, the influence of social groups becomes deeper to such that we can more know about the personality of people through their occupation or career job. For example, lawyers have usually serious personality and because of their job they can be a good adviser because they have to consider issue from an even-handed dimension or doctors are very acumen and clever because they have to determine the problems of illness in patients. Also, the work environment can affect the personality of people. If individuals work in the workplace in which rules are lax and manger and colleague do not value time and do their duties with delay, such people also do not become punctual and they do not attempt to perform their duties on time. However, if they find themselves in a work environment in which people are committed and active, they are encouraged and motivated to be a good employee and do their best for the progress of their company using innovate and creative ideas.
However, some people believe that socials groups cannot completely present the personality of people. These people believe that individuals usually do not show their true selves and cover their real personality. They try to introduce themselves based on what they aspire to be. I agree with them to some extent but the question is that how long people can hide their real character, 1 month, 1 year how long? After a while, people unconsciously show who they really are and they cannot play their artificial character.
In conclusion, in my view, throughout our lives we are influenced with different social groups and such groups have the main role in formation of our personality. So, they can be the representative of our character.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'group'.
Suggestion: group
..., individuals usually choose to join to groups that match their character. Therefore, ...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...completely clear and it can be found in all of the stages of their lives. When individua...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be the representative of our character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 33.0505617978 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 96.0 58.6224719101 164% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3044.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90177133655 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62587828386 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421900161031 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 924.3 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7434236269 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203123646908 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747190022617 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788933765339 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14768604926 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803409163899 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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