Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.

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Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.

To make a decision, knowing about the past is important. Because past experiences help us to shape our position about issues we have to decide. Without knowing the past, we will be like a helpless newborn baby. So it’s not wise to make a decision without taking past into account.

To make a decision, we need to consider some factors. We cannot just jump in to a decision without thinking about other things that may have influence in that matter. Sometimes while making a decision, depending on the nature of the decision, we have to consider the past, which helps us make the perfect decision. For example, economy is an ever changing field. The whole worlds’ economy is constantly changing. So for any institution to make an economic decision, it has to know about the pattern by which economic conditions changes in the past. Without knowing it, it won’t be able to make a suitable decision for the future.

For government policy making, a government depends on the past events and consequences, which help it to make its decision wisely for the future. Without knowing about the past, the government will just have to blindly make its policies and hope for the best, which is not a very pragmatic solution.

We have to make so many decisions in our life. For making those decisions we rely on our past to forsee the possible outcomes of our decisions. Knowing about the past helps us shape our decision about our life. For example, if someone needs to travel somewhere, he will try to sort out the best possible way of travelling. For that he will depend of his past experience of travelling. If a doctor prescribes his patient a medicine, he has to check the medical history of that particular patient to be sure that the medicine will not cause any harm to the patient.

Suppose an engineer builds a fire safety system. He relies on past informations so he can get an idea of how he should approach the issue. He has to analyze the past events and conclude what kind of safety system he should build.

So to conclude, the importance of knowing the past cannot be denied. Because it helps us a great deal to see the consequence of our decisions and hence making the best decision possible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n, knowing about the past is important. Because past experiences help us to shape our p...
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...ng about the past is important. Because past experiences help us to shape our position about iss...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is not a very pragmatic solution. We have to make so many decisions in our...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...velling. For that he will depend of his past experience of travelling. If a doctor prescribes h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence making the best decision possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75835475578 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60784720239 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444730077121 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5416204217 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.125 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378848678626 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127570179087 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100444994968 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234607453542 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105211245071 0.0667264976115 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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